The layout for your article is very good but I think there are a few adjustments that should be made to improve it and make it more professional. You made it look a lot like real magazines for example Q music magazines because the layout is quite similar. As you can't fit all the text inside the boxes I suggest that condense the text so more text can fit in each box. As there is a big gap between each box I suggest you adding another box in the template so that more text can be put on the page. Make the size of the text smaller and the length of each line larger so more text can be inserted in each box. Also you should expand and merge the text so a larger amount can be put in the template. As well shortening the text would be a good idea just to take out the less important parts. Finally as there is a curved box it means it will be harder to put text in so change it back to a rectangle and more text can be put in. As the pull quote is in the middle of the text maybe if you moved it onto the picture there would be wider space for anything extra if you wanted to add information. The heading ‘Krystal and Lola’ could be all on one line so that more boxes will fit in the article. I also suggest changing the colour of the boxes to a lighter colour so that the information is more visible to see.
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ReplyDeleteThe layout for your article is very good but I think there are a few adjustments that should be made to improve it and make it more professional. You made it look a lot like real magazines for example Q music magazines because the layout is quite similar. As you can't fit all the text inside the boxes I suggest that condense the text so more text can fit in each box. As there is a big gap between each box I suggest you adding another box in the template so that more text can be put on the page. Make the size of the text smaller and the length of each line larger so more text can be inserted in each box. Also you should expand and merge the text so a larger amount can be put in the template. As well shortening the text would be a good idea just to take out the less important parts. Finally as there is a curved box it means it will be harder to put text in so change it back to a rectangle and more text can be put in. As the pull quote is in the middle of the text maybe if you moved it onto the picture there would be wider space for anything extra if you wanted to add information. The heading ‘Krystal and Lola’ could be all on one line so that more boxes will fit in the article. I also suggest changing the colour of the boxes to a lighter colour so that the information is more visible to see.
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